when life’s a raw deal
can only cope and
work to heal
to live through
the rest of days



3 thoughts on “Raw

  1. Beautiful.. rawness is a meaninful quality these days for me too. I love haiku in English, have you ever come across Gregory Warren Wilson’s ones?

  2. Actually I met him a long ago, he’s an accomplished musician too; his poetry is a kind of Western haiku with plenty of blissful images and a subtle sense of humour. I love haiku in a musical form too; I bet you already know the short compositions by Debussy, the preludes, they have a figurative title and when you are listening to them with your eyes closed they will inspire you with an image you can translate into poetry, that’s how i listen to music…I really hope you’ll feel better in a short while.

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